Personal statement proof read?

[misteeq]

Im wondering if there would be anybody who is willing to proof read my personal statement? I have already gotten it read by a couple people who are writing the recommendation letters for me. I still feel like its not good enough and im having such a hard time cutting it down to 500 words (mine is at 600!):( it would be really nice to get some input from somebody who has already written this and gotten in. I know its a lot to ask but if somebody could have a look-see i would appreciate it so very much!
Thanks.:D

[maritimer]

sure I will take a look

send er' over

[tagteammotors]

I can take a look at it for you as well if needed

My email is ******m2006@yahoo.com

[misteeq]

i sent my statement as a PM to both of you...Thank u SO SOOO much for taking the time to read this..i truly appreciate it..please send me your feedback good or bad. Thanks again guys :)

[jar22]

I have a question about personal statement. About how long would be an average personal statement?mine is at 700 words, 2 pages at double space, 12 size with times new roman font and 1 inch margin on sides. What major changes do i have to make with my statement and can anybody ready my statement for me?I would really appreciate it. thanks.:)

[maritimer]

send it over. PM it to me. I will have a look.